[from Vanishing Point]
A short time later, Shinsuke's employees had all exited
the building and were patiently gathered in their designated places in the
parking lot. While the alarm had already shut off, the all-clear had still not
been given, so all they could do for now was stand and wait, some of them still
visibly tired from having to travel down numerous flights of stairs. Rika was
particularly exhausted, and in some discomfort, but Satoru, standing next to
her in front of his assembled workforce, did not look the slightest bit fatigued.
"Every employee is accounted for, sir," said
Rika. "Also… may I take these heels off? My feet are killing me." She
lifted her right foot and gently rubbed it, wincing.
Satoru looked over at her and nodded. "Go
ahead," he said. "Sit down if you need to."
With a sigh of relief, Rika sank into a half-sitting,
half-crouching position. She kicked off her heels, and started to gently
massage her stocking-clad feet while resting her clipboard against her raised
knees.
"Is there anything else?" asked Satoru.
"Anything unusual?"
"A couple of things," said Rika, looking down
at her clipboard. "One of our employees seems to have misplaced their ID
card, presumably in the rush to get out. Security also tells me that one of our
elevators is currently stationed at the top floor, and apparently travelled the
last thirty-two floors with nobody inside. We don't know where the fire alarm
came from, but we think-"
A look of comprehension dawned on Satoru's face, as he
began to mentally connect the dots. "Wait a second," he said. "Repeat
that last part."
"We don't know where the fire alarm came fro-"
"No, before that!" said Satoru, becoming
suddenly agitated. "The part about the elevator!"
"Oh… one of the elevators is currently stationed at
the top floor, and it apparently travelled the last thirty-two floors with
nobody inside."
Satoru's eyes widened as he put two and two together.
"It's Subject 14!" he exclaimed. "She's broken in!"
Rika looked quite understandably confused. "Mr.
Oeyama, what's-"
Satoru cut her off, motioning to his security guards.
"Security, with me!" he barked. "I want her found!" Turning
on his heel, Satoru marched back into the building, followed by several dozen
security personnel. Rika watched them go, her hands still resting on her feet,
looking tired and thoroughly baffled.
***
Kiyoko, oblivious to the impending danger, was continuing
to copy the files over to the flash drive. Cobra, meanwhile, was taking
advantage of the sudden radio silence to try and make herself a cup of tea.
Given her amnesia, this seemingly simple task was actually more difficult than
it sounded; while she could remember having a fondness for the drink, she
couldn't remember exactly how she used to prepare it, or which brand she
preferred. The only solution was to make cup after cup of tea until she found
the right formula, and as Hanako entered the kitchen behind her, she was
currently pouring her fifth cup.
"Any luck?" asked Hanako suddenly. Cobra, who
hadn't noticed the girl enter, suddenly jumped, spilling tea across the worktop
and almost scalding her right hand. She instantly slammed the teapot down and span
round to glare at Hanako.
"For God's sake, don't do that!" she barked.
"I could have scalded myself!"
Hanako withered beneath Cobra's fearsome gaze, and began
to rush out a panicked apology at breakneck speed. "I'msorryIjustwantedtofindouthowyourteaexperimentwasgoingandIdidn'tknowyoudidn'tknowIwashereandIthoughtyouwouldn'tmindifIcameandsaidhelloand-"
Finally running out of breath, she inhaled sharply before dropping into a rigid
bow. "I'm sorry!"
"Be more careful next time," chided Cobra.
Turning her attention back to the cup of tea in her hand, she poured a splash
of milk and a teaspoon of sugar into the cup and mixing it thoroughly, before
depositing the teaspoon into the sink, where it joined several others. Lifting
the cup to her lips, she took a small sip, then frowned.
"Still not right," she remarked. "Dammit."
She poured the cup down the sink, depositing the empty cup alongside the others,
then turned her attention to the mess on the worktop. "I suppose I'll have
to clear up all this mess now, as well."
"I'll do it!" said Hanako. "I mean, it was
basically my fault, so…"
Cobra nodded in acknowledgement. "Alright
then," she said. "Grab a wet tea-towel and clear all this up."
Hanako grabbed an old tea-towel from the side and ran it
under the tap briefly. "How do you think Kiyoko's doing?" she asked,
as she started to mop up the desktop.
Cobra glanced over at her headset, which was lying on the
side. "She's downloading the data as we speak," she said. "She
should be fine from here on in."
***
Sure enough, it wasn't long before the files had finished
copying. Kiyoko pulled the flash drive out of the computer and slipped it into
her pocket as she got up from the computer chair. "Okay. I've got the
data," she said.
There was a soft rustling sound as Cobra put her headset
back on. "Good," she said. "Nice work, Kiyoko. Now get out of
there, as quickly as possible. Remember, you'll have to take the fire escape:
the elevator will be too risky."
Kiyoko closed the various windows and dialogue boxes that
were open on Satoru's computer, then headed back out of his office into the
still-deserted corridor. After looking around for a few moments, she found the
entrance to the fire escape and quickly opened the door. She found herself
confronted with a long, wide staircase that spiralled down through the whole
building. Kiyoko looked down over the concrete railings and swallowed
nervously. "So many steps…"
"I know, but there's no alternative, I'm
afraid," said Cobra. "There shouldn't be any security, though, so you
can take it easy until you get to the bottom."
After glancing around to make sure the area was devoid of
security cameras, Kiyoko slowly faded back into view, a nervous expression on
her face. Being invisible for so long would probably put a strain on her, and
it was a long walk back down; she didn't want to tire herself out any more than
she had to. With this in mind, she began the long descent back down the fire
escape.
***
Unbeknownst to Kiyoko and Cobra, the Shinsuke security
guards were already gathering at the bottom of the fire escape, ready to
intercept her. Just as at the research facility, all of them were armed and
very dangerous.
"We're going to comb the entire building," said
Satoru. "Each of you take a separate floor. Leave no stone unturned. If
you so much as hear something breathing, you have my permission to shoot."
The guards nodded, and together they began to ascend the
staircase. With the elevators still disabled, this was the intruder's only
means of escape. As far as Satoru was concerned, there was no way out for
Kiyoko, invisibility or no invisibility.
***
By the time Kiyoko reached the 38th floor, she was
already exhausted. One hand clutched at a stitch in her chest, while the other
one clutched onto the handrail as she breathed heavily. As she reached yet
another flight of steps, she collapsed into a sitting position on the top step,
resting her hands on her knees as she tried to recover her breath. "I
can't… do this…" she gasped.
"Don't panic," said Cobra in her ear, trying to
reassure her. "Take it easy. There shouldn't be anyone else in the fire
escape, so you can relax. You're pretty much home and dry."
No sooner had Cobra said this than Hanako was startled by
the faint sound of footsteps echoing up from below. Peering over the handrail
in horror, Kiyoko saw the contingent of guards, still some two dozen strong,
heading up the steps only one or two floors beneath her. Kiyoko turned visible
again, starting to panic. "Th-the guards!" she whispered, the fear
evident in her quiet voice. "Th-they're here! In the fire escape! Hundreds
of them! Th-they're coming for me!"
"Damn it!" swore Cobra. "Somebody must
have… quick! Hide on the nearest floor!"
Climbing to her feet, Kiyoko sprinted for the door
leading to the 38th floor and dived through it. As the guards approached the
landing, one of them noticed the door just swinging to a close and quickly
raised a hand. "I'll take this floor," he said.
"Alright," said another guard. The first guard
stepped out of the pack and headed through the door into the 38th floor
corridor, while his squadmates continued on up to the next door. This guard who
had volunteered was slightly effeminate in appearance, with golden-blond hair
that covered his right eye, and ear piercings. Hearing Kiyoko's panicked
footsteps in the distance, he turned and quickly hurried after her.
With the realization that she had been spotted and was
being pursued, Kiyoko became absolutely terrified. Turning a corner, she dived
through the nearest door. The effeminate guard did not turn the corner in time
to see this, but had heard the door slam and guessed where she might have gone.
After a moment's hesitation, he slowly began to approach the door.
On the other side of the door was a small broom cupboard,
filled with cleaning supplies. Kiyoko's panicked breathing, bordering on
hyperventilation, could just he heard coming from within before she clapped a
hand over her own mouth, muffling it. As the man stepped closer, he could instead
hear her racing heart beating loudly in her chest.
Reaching out a hand, the guard slowly turned the handle
and pulled open the door. He found himself confronted with a seemingly ordinary
broom cupboard, completely devoid of people, although he knew that it was not
necessarily that straightforward. As he began to step inside, investigating
further, Kiyoko's heartbeat grew even louder and quicker, her expression one of
abject terror in spite of her own invisibility.
As the man took another step forward, Kiyoko
instinctively began to shrink back against the wall of the broom cupboard. As
she did so, her foot accidentally kicked a bucket, upsetting it and knocking
over the mop that had been inside, sending it clattering hard to the floor. The
noise seemed to fill the entire room, deafening her. If that had not given her
away, her instinctive gasp of horror upon realizing the situation definitely
had. The effeminate guard gasped in response, his reaction merely confirming
what she already knew. She had been rumbled. It was over. There was nothing
more she could do except stand there, trembling from head to foot, sweat
pouring down her face and tears of regret welling up in her eyes as she waited
to accept her inevitable fate…
The sitting position described early on sounds very difficult. It's basically squatting with your knees together, right? One stage away from sitting? I just tested a few things and none of them seem comfortable. Though, maybe the muscles that ache from the stairs get to relax like that - I can't quite so easily test walking down 50 flights of stairs, so I can't say for sure.
ReplyDeleteKiyoko is starting to sound like me in an RPG. A friend once remarked "you panic too easily". (Hmm, I should get that friend to start reading this... He might actually stick on.) In particular, when she came into the floor to begin with, the smart thing to do would be just stop against the wall and let him go past (if possible). Smarter would be to kick the door and then stay outside.
Of course, it's always easier from the outside.
... Oh, and for some reason, I'm repeatedly surprised that Kiyoko isn't an epic martial arts ninja. Go figure.
(And so I learn to hate Blogger's comment box.)
Also, fan-theory time: The guy who's in the cupboard with Kiyoko (... that sounds wrong) is actually on her side.
1) He volunteers to go in because he saw the door closing - it's not a hard assumption to make that there is only one person who could have caused it, yet he doesn't call for 2-3 people to go (or more).
2) They were told to shoot at anything they think is breathing - IE go trigger happy, kill first, questions later, America yadda yadda. And yet, not only does he have her pinned from the moment he entered the floor (since with the elevators out, there is no other way), he knows EXACTLY where she is now, and still hasn't fired. Maybe he's waiting for her to knock him out so he can claim he was incompetent?
My conspiracy theory is awesome. Deal with it. >_>
Scene(?) 2, paragraph 5. As a funsies, scene 1 has 13 paragraphs. You know what that means...
Delete"she poured a splash of milk and a teaspoon of sugar into the cup and mixing it thoroughly" - "mixing" is in present tense, despite everything else being past. Well, almost everything else. But the other one works.
Yeah, the sitting position is me completely failing at anatomy. I'm not good at visualizing things like that. It would have been fine if I hadn't put the "resting-the-clipboard-on-her-bent-knees" thing, but then I remembered she would have still been holding it and consulting it, so... didn't think that scene through entirely.
DeleteYeah, Kiyoko isn't your typical anime protagonist; she's more of a shrinking violet who's not used to all this action she's suddenly been thrown into. I like to think Kiyoko reacts the same way any normal person would react when suddenly thrown into these situations, but it's also partly that old trope where her power suits her personality. She'll grow in courage over the course of the series, though, just as a lot of the characters grow and develop over the course of the series.
As for your fan theory, it's certainly well-thought out, and well-justified, but of course I'm not going to say either way. You'll just have to wait until whenever it is that I write the next part ;)
As for the tense mix-up, I adapted this whole thing from the original episode script, and of course the script is written in present tense whereas this is written in past tense. That wasn't the only time I screwed up I tenses but it was the only one I didn't catch. Or maybe not :P
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