"I'm home!"
Yuuichi expected to see Ilana standing in front of the
doorway, waiting for him, or at least to hear her call out, "Welcome home!"
in the Russian accent he had now not only grown accustomed to, but also found
rather alluring. Instead, he was greeted with silence and an empty room.
"That's odd," Yuuichi remarked to himself as he
took his shoes off. "Usually she at least says hi when I get back. Maybe
she's not in…? But if she's not here, then where would she be? I don't think
she knows her way around town… come to think of it, I don't think she's even
left the apartment since she arrived here… and she calls me a shut-in…"
Yuuichi sighed. Well,
if she is here, he thought, I'd
better go find her. He set off through the apartment, looking around for
the distinctive figure of his betrothed. "Ilana?" he called out.
"Where are you?"
Almost to his surprise, the question was swiftly answered.
"In here," Ilana replied, her voice coming from the bedroom.
"Welcome home!"
"How come you didn't answer me when I came in?"
asked Yuuichi, making his way towards the bedroom.
"Am reading," said Ilana. "Heard you not.
Was… what is word?"
As Yuuichi opened the bedroom door, he began to answer,
"Distracted", but upon seeing Ilana, be became precisely that:
distracted. His jaw fell open, his brain seizing up entirely as his eyes drank
in the sight before him.
Ilana was sitting on the side of the bed, facing the
doorway, and was completely and utterly naked. She appeared to have had a shower;
there was a moist towel hanging around her neck, her red hair was damp, and patches
of moisture still shone on her soft, pale skin. She was holding one of
Yuuichi's manga in her hands, having been absent-mindedly reading it before he
had arrived home. Her nipples was covered by her hair, and her legs was
crossed, preserving her modesty, but the fact remained that for the first time
in his entire life, Yuuichi was staring at an actual naked woman. And she was
sitting on the bed just a few feet away from him.
Yuuichi didn't know where to look. His eyes shiftly
rapidly from body part to body part, unable to move away from Ilana's body, his
face growing steadily redder. Finally, he managed to stammer, "W-w-w-w-why
aren't you wearing any clothes, Ilana?!"
"Is my home," said Ilana simply, turning the
page of her manga. "No-one see me but you, and you husband, so it matter
not. Why? You not want to see me naked?"
Yuuichi blushed harder, blood starting to leak from his
nose. "Th-that's not what I meant!"
Ilana, seeing Yuuichi wide open for attack, decided to go
on the offensive. "Oh? You do
want see me naked?" she asked, smiling mischievously.
Blood spurted a little more out of Yuuichi's nose.
"Th-that's not what I meant either!" he exclaimed.
Ilana clapped a hand to her cheek in mock concern and
despair. "What do?" she wondered aloud. "My husband is be
pervert…"
"Y-you're the one sitting around with no clothes
on!" Yuuichi retorted.
"You have many comics of perversion," said
Ilana, waving the manga in her hand at Yuuichi. "This not one of them, but…"
"I told you, they're called manga!" insisted
Yuuichi. "And so what if I have hentai manga? All men like perverted
things: it's a fact of life!"
"Oh?" said Ilana, smiling. "You know,
Yuuichi, you work for two weeks now… it nearly a month since I came here… you make
good progress. You give much love. You say you like perverted things, hmm? So…"
Ilana put the manga to one side and suddenly stood up, sweeping her hair aside,
treating Yuuichi to a full-frontal view of her voluptuous naked body. "Here
is perverted thing," she said, putting her hands on her hips. "You
like?"
The sight of Ilana's bare, supple breasts was enough to
make Yuuichi dizzy. His eyes slowly panned down Ilana's thin, pale stomach,
until they reached… Oh my~! Fountains
of blood exploded from Yuuichi's nostrils, and he fainted with joy, falling
backwards to the floor with a thud.
Ilana giggled, looking down at her husband, who had been
reduced to a giddy, drooling wreck from just a single glimpse of her naked
form. "Yuuichi is such pervert," she said to herself, smiling fondly.
"He read porn comics, and look at pervert drawings on computer when he
think I not look. Even single look at naked woman too much for him. But… is why
I like him, I guess. He is… what is word… open. He not pretend to be person he
is not. He know he is pervert. He admit he is pervert. If I do only little
thing like not change after shower, and it still make him this happy… is good.
To see him happy makes me happy. He may be pervert, but he also correct: all
men are. And he is my man. And I love him so much~" She glanced down at
her bare self. "Now… to put on clothes before catch freeze. After all, husband
did ask~"
Y'know, it's only just occurring to me that this is possibly the most alienating - or niche - story. Rather apt for... Probably most of your current and future audience, but nonetheless going into things that, while I don't mind reading, I think some may. Though I didn't mention it directly on the last entry, it feels a little bogged down in mundane, and then this goes R15+ (incidentally, this tag is apparently empty - go figure Blogger). Well, it's all still initial thoughts. I'll wait and see where it goes.
ReplyDeleteEDIT: Also, this particular page, but not the scene as such, is all too applicable to me recently. I got a good chuckle out of that. (And hah, throwing off your feedback sensor!)
DeleteYeah. This is just a plain old mixture of ecchi, heartwarming romance, and wish fulfilment. I don't expect everybody to like it but it's going to be great fun for those who do, myself included. It might not be the most exciting thing ever but it's a slice-of-life ecchi romance comedy, so it's not going to have the same sort of action and drama as Vanishing Point or whatever. But yeah. Thanks for the feedback, as that is still feedback of sorts.
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